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True History by Jason Stoddard

 
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 1:26 pm    Post subject: True History by Jason Stoddard Reply with quote

What did you think of this story? Question
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:59 am    Post subject: Hard work Reply with quote

Interesting ideas but quite a disjointed writing style. It read in parts more like a breakdown of what the author intended to write.

The love story felt unconvincing and almost felt like unrequited love. I am unsure if that was the authors intention.

The lost returning humans was an old idea not very well handled.

The end was a bit too cheesy as well.

I found the story hard work.
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